Sharing our Writing

In our study of communities, we wrote about our own community and made a magazine page.  We learned about titles, captions, other parts of expository writing.

We read from the Author's Chair.

Listening to our friends

By Jose in Mrs. McLaughlin's class

I live in Mesquite, Texas.  My apartments have 2 bedrooms.  I live on the bottom floor, and there’s a little playground outside.  I like to go to the park.  I like to go to the swings, but I need somebody to push me.  I like to go to the slide.  The slide is fun.  I like to go to the monkey bars.  I throw out the trash with my brother.  I clean my room.  I  also wash the dishes.

Sometimes friends help friends read.

My name is Ronnie.  I love Hawaiian Falls because it is fun.  I love school because I get to learn about Math and Reading.  I love my teacher, Mrs. Fink.  My dad grew a garden full of green vegetables.  I have 4 bedrooms.  One bedroom is mine, the other 3 bedrooms are my sister’s and brother’s and mom’s and dad’s.  I garden because there is one there, and it is really fun.  My friends are the best friends ever in the whole entire world.  My teacher is the best teacher in the whole entire world.  I love lunch at my school.  I love my teacher, Mrs. Fink, because she has taught me a lot of things.

By Angel

My community is Mesquite, Texas.  I like to go to Olive Garden.  I like the food there.  I go with my mom and my dad.  They have stairs and tables up the stairs.  I live in a house.  I have a black bunny named Cynthia.  The people that live at my house are my little sister named Mariah, my mom, my nanny, my dad, and me.  Sometimes I do clothes activities.  I fold them and hang them up.  Me and my sister put them in the closet.  I also clean up our play area.

By Raiven

I have a house mixed with an apartment.  We have 3 rooms in our house and a 3rd story.  What I do at home are chores.  Now my job at home is to clean the tub out, and I have a job.  My bedtime is 9:00.  At 7:15, my job is to learn so I can go to a next grade like 3rd grade, 4h grade, 5th grade, or 6th grade.  My fun place to go is Abby Cats.  It’s a game place.  I like Abby Cats because they have lots of games like bowling or laser tag.  You can eat food there.  My favorite thing to eat is a jumbo hot dog.  They give you a lot of cheese on your hot dog.  I love my community.